Writing

[estepheia]

Hubby took the kids to the museum, giving me a whole afternoon to write in. Unfortunately my brain was not in the mood today. Progress was slow and now I'm not sure if today's output is any good. *sigh* The chapter seems slow when truly I should try to keep the tension going. Both characters suddenly plunged into a bout of introspection. Normally I favor show don't tell, so whenever I start explaining what goes on inside the characters' heads, I wonder if my readers aren't bored to tears. Maybe sangpassionne can help me with that chunk. She knows where the story is going, her advice is always helpful.