jmchau ([identity profile] jmchau.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] estepheia 2007-09-03 08:20 pm (UTC)

no matter how many years have passed since they last fucked each other’s brains out

I think I would leave it at 'fucked each other'

Other than that? looks good.
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