ext_8972 ([identity profile] estepheia.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] estepheia 2011-10-19 10:24 pm (UTC)

Great quote, thank you (I love that movie!). Alas, it doesn't fit the chapter - and it's difficult to explain why. It's the wrong tone, too wistful and nostalgic - the chapter is hectic, almost panicky, and the two boys aren't really good friends; in fact, they are rivals, yet the hero helps the other boy anyway, because it's the right thing to do.

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