Thank you, Brandi, for the detailed feedback. I really love it if readers quote their favorite sections. Makes it a lot easier to gauge the effectiveness of the story. :-)
And yes, I think Xander is trying very hard to be brave and even though he baited Angel (which was dumb) he has the moral highground.
Angel and Xander aren't exactly at their best in this story. :-)
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Date: 2003-07-12 01:51 pm (UTC)And yes, I think Xander is trying very hard to be brave and even though he baited Angel (which was dumb) he has the moral highground.
Angel and Xander aren't exactly at their best in this story. :-)