I still stand by my opinion, that the story is too long-winded and zig-zag-y for my taste. And just because the two characters are so self-centered that they think that every problem is their fault, doesn't mean they are flawed or three-dimensional. Lack of self-worth is a common trait in slash, a plot device, an excuse for a "two steps forward one step back" rhythm. There are many more flaws in the characters that weren't explored...
Ah well, let's just say RPG fics are too rough for my taste. I suppose I prefer shorter stories that have been thoroughly edited, betaed and cut. Probably, because I always think that my own stories are too long-winded.
But thank you anyway for defending the story. It's always fun to get into a debate.
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Re: RPG Wes/Spike
Date: 2002-12-13 05:19 am (UTC)And just because the two characters are so self-centered that they think that every problem is their fault, doesn't mean they are flawed or three-dimensional. Lack of self-worth is a common trait in slash, a plot device, an excuse for a "two steps forward one step back" rhythm. There are many more flaws in the characters that weren't explored...
Ah well, let's just say RPG fics are too rough for my taste. I suppose I prefer shorter stories that have been thoroughly edited, betaed and cut. Probably, because I always think that my own stories are too long-winded.
But thank you anyway for defending the story. It's always fun to get into a debate.