This is intriguing, Estepheia. I like it. As far as a title, I'd agree with "Fragile Balance", based on what I know so far.
Faith, Cordelia, Lilah - I am so there.
Can I make an eensy comment on a minor detail that tripped me up? Faith's wrapped in a towel. Then she's got her arms folded over her chest. So immediately, I'm hit with mental images of Faith's towel falling right off of her. This is not a bad thing, understand. But it made me pause and think, wait a minute: she can't do both.
I told you it was eensy. Anyway, keep us posted on your progress. Thanks....
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Date: 2002-12-25 06:24 pm (UTC)Faith, Cordelia, Lilah - I am so there.
Can I make an eensy comment on a minor detail that tripped me up? Faith's wrapped in a towel. Then she's got her arms folded over her chest. So immediately, I'm hit with mental images of Faith's towel falling right off of her. This is not a bad thing, understand. But it made me pause and think, wait a minute: she can't do both.
I told you it was eensy. Anyway, keep us posted on your progress. Thanks....