The neon lights went on automatically, revealing… nothing. And right here's where I felt like the story really kicked in. The descriptions and dialogue following that are all very sharp, and the tension mixed with defiance from Spike's end and a desire to dominate from Angel's drives this along and is fully engaging.
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Date: 2004-12-18 08:15 am (UTC)And right here's where I felt like the story really kicked in. The descriptions and dialogue following that are all very sharp, and the tension mixed with defiance from Spike's end and a desire to dominate from Angel's drives this along and is fully engaging.
Definitely looking forward to part two.