Oh, Gina, if you're rereading this, could you do me a favour and take notes where you feel it's too slow, repetitive, redundant, etc? I will get the whole thing beta'd, but before I do I want to read through it again and I could use a few comments.
I already made a few minor changes to earlier installments, going back to prepare/foreshadow later developments (and I forget to mention Ethan's beard in the last section...). I want the whole thing to be neat and tidy
I'm glad you enjoyed the story and that the ending surprised you. *beams*
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Date: 2005-01-12 07:08 pm (UTC)I already made a few minor changes to earlier installments, going back to prepare/foreshadow later developments (and I forget to mention Ethan's beard in the last section...). I want the whole thing to be neat and tidy
I'm glad you enjoyed the story and that the ending surprised you.
*beams*