Hmmm. I might go back and add some Oz's, actually. Especially when others refer to him; you don't really have to explain it, but I think if it's *there*, in the beginning, it might flow a little better? Doesn't have to be added now, though; before the final beta is good.
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Date: 2005-07-11 02:37 pm (UTC)