Aw, poor Ethan. *pets him* This was perfect. I love all the detail you give in the manhandling of Ethan and how well you made the notice of blood such a disturbing... I almost want to say shock. It really worked. But now you know I really want more. Isn't that horrible? It drives me crazy when folks ask for more. It's incredibly flattering but still, sometimes you just can't say no and then you have yet another WIP on your to-do list.
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Date: 2005-10-20 03:41 pm (UTC)Isn't that horrible? It drives me crazy when folks ask for more. It's incredibly flattering but still, sometimes you just can't say no and then you have yet another WIP on your to-do list.
Very well done, regardless of a sequel or not.