Oooo! Love the cliffhanger! And it's even more exciting stopping here with more to come than if this was a whole chapter. The wreck is just . . . so visceral and immediate; the reader is grabbed and shaken and feels every moment of the experience. Well done!
But, ohmigod! The ending! [Ethan]feels a small stab of pain as the bright spark of a nearby life force is snuffed out, and then...Please tell me they hit a deer or something! Giles is not dead! Ethan is not dead! Neither Giles or Ethan are dead! La la la. EthanandGilesandSnapearenotdead. La la la.
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Date: 2007-09-22 09:36 pm (UTC)But, ohmigod! The ending! [Ethan]feels a small stab of pain as the bright spark of a nearby life force is snuffed out, and then... Please tell me they hit a deer or something! Giles is not dead! Ethan is not dead! Neither Giles or Ethan are dead! La la la. EthanandGilesandSnapearenotdead. La la la.