I think the thing I love best about these (other than the utter pornariffic HOTNESS of them) is the characterization... Then the penny drops and Xander feels like a dork. He grins sheepishly. Heh. Terrific Xander there.
I also especially liked the conversation when they first woke up. It seems very realistic and I think it's well-done. I like the way you captured the nuances of their respective discomfort with the situation.
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Date: 2003-03-27 10:25 pm (UTC)I think the thing I love best about these (other than the utter pornariffic HOTNESS of them) is the characterization... Then the penny drops and Xander feels like a dork. He grins sheepishly. Heh. Terrific Xander there.
I also especially liked the conversation when they first woke up. It seems very realistic and I think it's well-done. I like the way you captured the nuances of their respective discomfort with the situation.
Love the way you use words.
Also? HOT! *g*