Fanfic question
Jul. 11th, 2005 04:26 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
estepheiaA question to those of you who are reading Four Fear:
Do you think the story would work better if I called Oz by his nickname instead of Danny or Daniel? When I started writing this story it was supposed to be short and the use of his real name didn't matter so much. I wanted to show Oz dormant in Danny, but the focus shifted away from him as the characters started to live in my head.
This is a pretty long story now, I'm beginning to feel I should have stuck with 'Oz' - especially since the story has several references to The Wizard of Oz. I was trying to come up with a situation where he gets the nickname Oz, but drew a blank. So, should I go back and re-edit the story? Kick out most of the Daniels and Dannys? Or shall I keep it as it is for now, and make the change when I send the story off for a final beta read?
Do you think the story would work better if I called Oz by his nickname instead of Danny or Daniel? When I started writing this story it was supposed to be short and the use of his real name didn't matter so much. I wanted to show Oz dormant in Danny, but the focus shifted away from him as the characters started to live in my head.
This is a pretty long story now, I'm beginning to feel I should have stuck with 'Oz' - especially since the story has several references to The Wizard of Oz. I was trying to come up with a situation where he gets the nickname Oz, but drew a blank. So, should I go back and re-edit the story? Kick out most of the Daniels and Dannys? Or shall I keep it as it is for now, and make the change when I send the story off for a final beta read?
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Date: 2005-07-11 04:07 pm (UTC)Looking forward to it anyway.
Gina
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Date: 2005-07-11 06:56 pm (UTC)